May 3, 200718 yr Great job. Perhaps this piece would benefit from a calm middle section or something to give this piece a more diverse feel overall. It sounds like piece should come to a climate end. As it is now, it just seems to hit the end of the line and immediately stop. Overall, awesome piece. The sound matches the subject well.
May 3, 200718 yr Great, but I agree with CK, it could use a calmer section to contrast the storm. I have a feeling that you have yet to end the piece and that's why it sort of hangs.
May 3, 200718 yr Author Great, but I agree with CK, it could use a calmer section to contrast the storm. I have a feeling that you have yet to end the piece and that's way it sort of hangs. Yes Rolifer and Ck the Fat! I'm in the middle of it, this is a big construction and it's definitely not finished yet...that's why it end's so abrupt, I have uploaded it to Soundclick. Seems like Soundclick only allows max 4 min. My piece is now 8 min, if you want to hear the rest it can be heard on my other thread called "Achilles for piano and orchestra". Right now I'm composing "Helen's dance" which will be a rythmic exotic section after all the military marches that you have heard :) Thanks for having listened Fredrik
May 3, 200718 yr Author Great job.Perhaps this piece would benefit from a calm middle section or something to give this piece a more diverse feel overall. It sounds like piece should come to a climate end. As it is now, it just seems to hit the end of the line and immediately stop. Overall, awesome piece. The sound matches the subject well. Hi Ck Fat, have added "Helen's dance", to the poem. Badongo.com Fredrik
