Musical Moment In F

A short piano work called Musical moment in F major.

Surely this is not playable!!

Is this piece meant to be atonal?

Thins I didn't like:

• It sounds like it's in the wrong meter
  
• I doubt that it's playable
  
• There's no coherency, it doesn't sound 'together'
  
• It doesn't seem to have any direction
  
• The ending is unexpected, and sounds like a mistake on the part of a composer, sometimes endings like this can work well, but this one doesn't (IMO)
  

Please don't attack me for disliking your piece, I have told what I think are the main problems with it, it is up to you whether you act upon my comments, but please don't assume it is a personal attack on you.

Thanks for the comments. This piece is playable.

Regards

Surely this is not playable!!

Is this piece meant to be atonal?

Yes in a way.