Organ piece thing

This is an organ song that I wrote. I wrote it mostly for my own listening pleasure, but if you like it that's great too. I'm sure that I'm plagarizing Bach at one point...

organsong.mid

It's a little immature, composition-wise. Some lessons or books on composition (especially chords and voice leading) could come in handy. For example, why are you using all these octaves? And why is it you leave out the third in, for example, bar 4? (The b-e-b-e-b-chord and the two chords following it.)

I think the sound of the midi organ has hypnotized you. As well it might.

It's bach is worse than it's byte.

Play that on the piano and you will find tumbleweed blowing through a harmonic desert.

But hey, at least you aren't on a street corner doing graffiti. Don't give up.

I wrote it the way I did because it sounds good on my computer that way.

Yeah.

Also, if I understand you correctly, I left it out because it sounded better with it out.

This is what it sounded like on my computer:

Organsong

liked! sounds fine! just i dont understand why did you post such piece in a forum for rock, jazz and similars. it is very classical!