Hey guys, a couple weeks ago I posted a study called "luscious" for string orchestra. Today I have it here as an expanded piece. The beginning is nearly the same, expect with an accelerando in the A'' section, so that when the A'' section appears at the end, it has more impact. There are many pieces of advice taken from others, importantly modulation. frankly, these are not fabulous examples of the modulation you have been asking for, as they don't don't happen on the climaxes of melodies, which does not come to me naturally. I'm working on another exercise which will hopefully do that in a convincing manner, however this was more of a brain itch than an effort to improve.