Here we go. From the theme only you know the sound will be above average. BTW, Peter, I think the score would be easier to follow if you also provided parts (some of them at least). Scrolling a single page after less than 10-15 seconds is unavoidable when there are so many instruments involved, but for a more close and in-depth analysis I would really have preferred to go part by part in some cases.
• I: Very spot-on chromatic color. You don't go too far from the original material (yet?). I like the approach that I think you're taking. (You did)
• II: This one is more intense, but not denser. Really nice job with this second variation. The dissonances are somehow not strong enough to provoke a feeling of tension, but to bring attention and carry some kind of "background flow".
• III: Here stuff begins to get really original. This var. feels so cheerful!
• IV: The fact that you make no random pauses (at least for now, up to variation VII) makes it easier to stay I believe (basically I agree with what Quinn said). Kinda difficult piano part!
• V: III, IV, V and VI get along very well in my opinion. The transition from one to another is almost not noticeable, specially in case of III, IV and V.
• VI: I like how the piccolo (and wooden winds up to some degree?) is kind of the leading voice. The Q&A structure works pretty nicely in this movement; another great job and one of my favourite variations.
• VII: here the music seems to be refusing to end, it feels like a great "connection" between VI and VIII.
• VIII: really original, though I think this is the 3rd-4th movement with a certain pattern in common.
• IX: stuff gets really interesting here, less than in the next movement but I like how the various voices get entwined seamlessly.
• X: These harmonic twists here are great. Again, it feels like with each variation, an entirely new piece is arising by deviating slowly but steadily from the original material. This is my favourite variation.
• XI: This one felt a bit short to me (but it suddenly made sense). Yet another great variation nonetheless.
• XII: Is it me or variations are getting shorter? I barely noticed differences between XII and XIII and it was too late when I realised I was in XIV. Your transitions vary from almost unnoticeable to pleasantly contrasting. This is clearly a piece in which you have put a lot of effort, and in all honesty I wouldn't have expected less!
• XII-XVI: I would say these form a subgroup inside your set: flutes and the piccolo keep dancing around the theme, deviating longer from the OG material, before coming back —more and more briefly— to the theme.
• XVII-XVIII: another smaller subgroup I'd say. The chromatic scales, this time on the violas (on XVII) & piano (XVIII), sound delicious and more subtle than in II.
• XIX-XX: The music flows faster than what I can process, making me go backwards a lot to fully listen the variation subset. This is great music to get up, many thanks for sharing it Peter.
• XXI-XXIII: Just another 💯 transition from the lightness of the prior subgroup (which is BTW heavier than the XVII-XVIII subgroup, and that one in time lighter than the XII-XVI which passed like a breeze... It seems that consciously or not, you kind of ordered these subgroups!)
• XXIV: noticeably longer than the rest (feels like more than one variation to me), which may even make sense if this was treated as a piano concerto(?). Not sure, but anyway, I liked how you implemented it and where. It felt like a deserved and well placed rest for the orchestra. XXV makes the comeback much more smooth! Piano still holds the main voice, but the orchestra keeps pushing more and more! I love it.
• XXVI: A daring one, I would say. Its development is so cool, the combo of measure indications works really good. Up to now, literally nothing made me doubt, I just followed the piece without a single thought of the kind "well this works but I would have preferred XYZ". It just didn't happen, it's so well constructed and well-thought that my brain didn't question it.
Until now, at the very end of this great work. I suppose this is intentional: imagine you were recording this set of variations and that you remember that the place where you're doing that is closing very very soon, and thus that the janitor is on his way to open the door and interrupt you "Hey Peter, we're closing". Preventing that, you cut half a page and accelerate stuff, but it's too late he's approaching the door so you end abruptly! This is kind of what I felt here. Not sure if this was the best or worst way to end this absolute impressive work: personally I did not like it and I left the theatre unsatisfied, wanting some more variations to listen to. I've been listening to this continuously like an hour and a half already, and this probably just increased my desire for a "proportional ending".
This is all subjective, though: one objective fact here is that this movement stroke me more than others because it was daring, and because I did not expect it to end like this. My perspective of such ending may change over time, but the fact it gave me a really powerful impression will stay: perhaps this was, after all, the best way to end the piece. It must not be a bad ending, nor a bad piece, if it leaves you asking for more!
Belated merry Christmas 🎄, Peter. I do hope you to stay around for many, many more years and bring us more of your HQ content.
Kind regards!!