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Hello. It's been a while since i last posted here. Today I am back with a new piano sketch. Hope to get some good honest constructive critique on this work in progress. Thanks :) The Day Tomorrow Died draft2 wip - Bjarke Tan - Flow 1.mp3 The day tomorrow died revision 1.9 score.pdf

Nice work, I’m doing this on my phone on the way back from a performance so I can’t really do much in depth at the moment, But there are some nice moments in the music with the winds and the ambient pacing. I would put more things to add texture if I were you though

Thank you very much – and, haha, I do not recognize the dissonances that much. But good to know that I’m just far enough away from „simple harmonies“, so that I must not exaggerate with dissonances much more! That’s nice to hear. At first, I wanted to develop the fugato further to a usual climax and ending. But, since its flow had already been „disrupted“ twice by the second and third stanzas of the poem, I decided to conclude the piece with a recapitulation of the opening „improvisation“, to finally come home to the key of Bb major. I was not sure about that decision, since that recap has a much more melancholic mood than one would expect for the task to depict a bright summer day. So I really appreciate that you – and some others – enjoyed that particular section. Yes, this kind of “orchestra” is indeed a bit weird (or “diverse”, as you politely called it). I use the YCF competitions to experiment with instrumentation while orchestrating my pieces, which I usually compose (initially) for solo piano. And since the competition rules limit the amount of instruments or players to five, I had to figure out how to achieve the greatest possible variety of colors: I needed a melody instrument and a substitute for the human voice, so I used the trumpet both with and without a mute. The cello and guitar provide the “orchestra” with the bass and rhythmic foundation. The piano remains as an accompanying instrument, but being paired with the accordion, which—in my opinion—is the most important instrument for the piece to produce a somewhat „French“ mood. Thank you, that is a great compliment for me and proves that I was not as wrong with the „weird“ accordion idea! Fortunately, yes—I won third prize in that competition.

Wow that sounds really great and the intro seems so familiar but the main tune so unique.

Here's a little something I cooked up this week. I was aiming to weave interesting harmonies from the interactions between the voices. It doesn't have a title yet: so any ideas welcome. Do you think it's too repetitive? Or maybe needs more counterpoint? I could extend it with a contrasting middle section perhaps? I'm not done with the notation yet: so lots of missing slurs. In terms of production, I wonder if the quiet section needs to be boosted further? All thoughts welcome. (Updated versions will be posted lower down the thread.) Full orchestra improv #12 (with ZL compressor).mp3 Full orchestra improv #12 (with ZL compressor).pdf

Hello, second post on this forum. I would like to share with you my new piano collection called Feminine Fragments. Any feedback and suggestion is well accepted. For the score on video visit my YT page on the link below, aswell if you're curious about my other composition. Thank you! Click here Feminine Fragments.mp3 Feminine Fragments.pdf

Not much to say, I just wanted to show my work and see if other have a word about it. I felt like it was a bit overextended after measure 78, I'm not sure what should I do with it as shortening it will make it sound wrong and not right. C1.mp3 C1.pdf

This is my piano miniature. In this music, I wanted to capture the image of a doll or a figurine: a cold, lifeless kind of beauty... But is it really lifeless? =)

“The Last Request” (from the cycle of musical illustrations to Max Dalin’s novel “The Bonfire and the Salamander”). This is a decadent romance. The video is simply a story and is not directly connected to the plot of the novel. Music by A. Khomenko Lyrics by V. Osadchenko Sung by A. Yachmenev Lyrics: Why should I fear the grave, or death’s embrace? A shimmering moonlit path calls me away. But, friends, as you escort me from this place, Upon my breast the sacred Eye don’t lay. White roses, silks, chrysanthemums so fair Will wrap my body gently in their fold. Though mournful, mute, you’ll hear me singing there: A dead heart through the roses, calm and cold. And when the moon is full, unbar the door. How weightless is the moon-winged flight! Whoever stays faithful, though life is o’er, Will enter eternity with me tonight. Twilight will take our weary souls to rest. No more of candles, no more of prayer. The grief of old grows quieter in the breast, And old remembrance hardly hurts us there... (translation by Claude)

Hi @Bjarke, A piece which sounds very much like belonging to a medieval epic! (Probably due to the regular use of the pentatonic scale and the chosen rhythm), m 20, is a typical example, along many other. Overall, I found it well built. Interesting areas with a gradual increase in tension, along with the contrast between the climbing voices and the descending ones (e.g.: m. 24). The "third voice" (not really written this way, but this is how it felt to me) in mm. 23-27, and mm. 31-32 (left hand) brought an interesting new contrast. mm. 26 & 27, I liked the E chord (which comes back in m. 32), really interesting new colour. Second part starting from m. 39, I found overall too repetitive: the melody lacks passion and the bass is missing contrast, until we reach m. 48, which comes as a nice change! Measure 51, we are clearly back in the epic theme, I liked the strong accents, felt like the battle field of the epic ;-) mm. 68-71, I found a good idea to get gradually out of the intense move. The intrigue you bring in mm. 81-82 are an excellent transition (really in the theme) to reach the closure. Thanks for sharing and please let me know if I completely missed the target with the medieval theme idea. Take care, Julien

Hi @Filippo Noti , Long work you've done there! The sheer length must have put off some listeners ;-). It's extremely diverse, moving from one style to another. Some movements I liked (e.g.: parts 4 and 5), others less. In general, I found too many repetitions. Here is some detailed feedback (don't know if you were looking for some, but I think that's the idea of the forum in general, so here goes): Part 1: In general, very chill music, very relaxing. I felt as though I was in an art museum. Some more precise feedback you might find useful (based on my personal impressions of course): * I felt the introductory material, that leads to the more interesting mm. 11-13, was a tad too long (I typically found mm. 3, 7, 9 superfluous) * In m. 17, my brain was expecting for a change in the first notes of the melody, sth different from the usual G, C, E * in mm. 21-47 * this too, I felt, was a little too repetitive * funny writing though, I guess the eighth notes must be played with the left hand? * mm. 49-56, the idea to reuse the main theme is a good one, with richer chords. Some of them could probably be improved, e.g.: in m. 49, I liked the first 2 chords, but not so much the 3rd one - maybe a G7? Same for the next measures where you repeat the 2nd chord. * the very last chord, I found out of character, not in the "mood" of your composition (probably a bit too "brutal") Part 2: * mm. 60-68: soft, mellow part (a little too mellow to my taste), with some interesting rythmic textures * m. 69-71: quite a surprising change, I liked that part, especially the arrival of the 3rd voice, well done! I would encourage you to build on that! Part 3: not a great fan overall, I felt it lacked of some passion: it felt a bit like an exercise Part 4: really a funny part! * I liked the little variations in the accompaniement (e.g.: m. 102, 105, * m. 125: I liked the transition * interesting chords in the treble in mm. 131-142 * mm. 143-150, I found quite repetitive and aggressive * brilliant end in mm. 167-169 Part 5: a nice fugue, very baroque, I liked it! Part 6: * what a contrast, we're moving from baroque to Satie-like music! * Although I liked the atmosphere, I found most chords too dissonent (maybe this was the intention). Some were very nice though, e.g.: 202, 204, 207 * I liked the use of the 3rd voice Part 7: the idea is good, sounds like a very good basis for a song, I would have developped the idea a little more (didn't really see the point of m. 249) Thanks for sharing, and looking forward to hearing more of your compositions! Take care, Julien

I enjoyed listening to this. I’m far from the best person to analyze other people’s music, but here are some thoughts on what I heard. First, I think you should just call this f minor and write it as such. Phrygian dominant would have a g flat, I believe. (But I haven’t worked with modes in years and you might have a different reason for not putting this is f minor.) Add accidentals for the natural minor as needed. It will still give the sound you are looking for and make it much easier for a piano player to read. Also, is that a tie on the top note of each pair of notes on beats 2 and 3? It doesn’t sound like it is in the recording. I think they are not necessary and I found them distracting when playing through the piece. I like the themes. They are pleasing to the ear, at least to mine. There could probably be a little more variety. Measures 13-14 do reverse the direction of the tune, but it’s still rhythmically the same, and I wonder if that is giving enough sense of “new material”. Also, it’s in the same key. (This is a problem I have writing music — trying to keep things familiar but not beating any dead horses). How about putting something in a related key, maybe a major or try reversing measures 13 and 14, so you would have the new phrase start with three quarter notes. How about putting in some theme that has wider intervals. You have mostly step-wise motion the whole way through with the exception of a few jumps in the octave section. I think measure 39 and following have the more successful new material. Good variety but the key is still intact, so it’s provides some connection (again, for my ears, can’t speak for others). Maybe don’t use repeats for measures 63 / E section. The listeners’ ears will be well-familiar with the ideas by that point. Finally, I vote for an authentic cadence to at the end. It sounds unfinished. Like I said, just some thoughts I had.

Hello @InstrumentalistElle, I still remember your masterful string quartet, which depicts rocks or mountains surrounded by clouds. And since it features many “extended” string techniques involving harmonics and flageolets, I considered it to be a great composition example, but having rare chances to be ever performed live. Now, with this magnificent live performance, you’ve proven me wrong! Congratulations—for a composer, having one’s own pieces performed live is an incomparable reward, far greater even than winning a prize at a composers’ forum competition! How did you achieve that connection with such an outstanding ensemble? If you could tell me, I might even try to compose a string quartet (end of joke). 😀

Thank you all for the kind feedback. I’m glad you enjoyed the piece, and I appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment.

Hi YC members, hope everything is going well with you. Today, I got the idea to start this topic: the best pieces you have listened to in 2026 so far. I don't mean you have to only mention pieces released in 2026 — but the best pieces you have listened to in 2026 as of now. I'd like to share: Jon Appleton's "Homage To Orpheus". Makoto Ueno "Preludes, Livre 2, CD 131: No. 10, Canope". Also, this piece as well: Ben Nobuto's "Hope Spiral". My friend @CrystalCanon told me about him, and I immediately fell in love — please check him out! Thanks, CrystalCanon! Well, I actually have many more pieces, but that's all for now. Next, it's your turn — what are yours!?

A really enjoyable piece, Alexx. It all flows smoothly from one section to the next. There’s good balance between the parts and good sound production. I especially like your phrasing. I think waltzes can be kind of stagnant if the phrases adhere to the 1, 2, 3 beats to much, but you seemed to have broken the phrases up just enough to give it all a nice forward momentum. Really good listening to this.

Amazing recording. Enjoyed it. And congratulations

Not sure if this one is the best, but it is certainly my favorite one.

sorry to necro a dead thread, but I was just checking my socials when I remembered this post! I actually just had this piece recorded by the principal strings at the Bolshoi Theatre, believe it or not!! They're definitely worthy musicians lol, so here's a link in case you're interested: https://youtu.be/SIrKsoVDBKU

Hello, yet again with another prelude... GAWL aren't you sick of them yet?? Anyway, this one flirts between Db and C#m. It's 6 pages, but not that long as far as measures. It's grandiose, yet soft and subtle. Unfortunately, the midi doesn't do it justice. The arpeggio measures don't hold the first chord/low note in each one, but hopefully the score paints the right picture. I think it's due to the amount of notes held with the sustain. I hope you enjoy this, and any comments or concerns are welcome. :) Prelude 18 - Db.mp3 Prelude 18 - Db - score - Full Score.pdf

A lot of overlapping perfects. I see you tried to imitate birds and animals. I see you have done it in a creative way, so I gave you a 10. Overall, it isn't very bad. Did you check out these? or piano I was expecting this type.