jonesy1331

Update after almost 3 years !! Revisited this piece and added a bass trombone part as I play in a trombone quartet at my school 🙂 I would refer to this as my 2nd draft and will probably update it at some point. It is definitely a work in progress. Would love feedback/criticism ! If you like this, I hope to finish an arrangement of The Legend of Ashitaka from Studio Ghibli's "Princess Mononoke" for 8-part trombone choir by the end of this year. I also have some sketches and old pieces that i'm revisiting 🙂 -J

Hi, I have a chromebook so musescore is not available to me yet :(. Thanks for your feedback I will definitely be studying more harmony, voice leading and counterpoint as I continue to write more. I chose "Green" as the title because I didn't want the title to just be "Trombone Trio #1" instead. The Key of Eb and pieces written in this key signature have always made me think of green or a shade of green. This piece is a nice dark green to me. It also doesn't hurt that green is my favorite color 😉

Hi Guillem, Thanks so much for your tips. I'm definitely just starting to get into composing so thank you for all your tips! I'll definitely take a look at that book by Rimsky-Korsakov. Thanks again, J

The audio is really bad but it's whatevs. The crescendos and decrescendo are supposed to be more subtle and gradual than those in the audio. m.14 is supposed to be a sudden drop in dynamics and m.26-27 is supposed to rise and fall evenly but dramatically. I apologize for the audio its pretty bad. The last sonority is badly balanced and blended in the audio but eh idek at this point. My first composition i fully wrote and am sharing! currently working on a wind ensemble piece so look out for that if you liked this. Welcome to feedback and criticism. I would also any tips relating to composing, online notation software (i use flat.io), or DAW, etc. Thanks! -J Green.xml

What writing program do you use?