Yes, you're dead right about that. Will take most of those staccato marks out in my next revision.
Glad you liked it otherwise!
I created the piece in sporadic bursts of rapid composition over the course of three months or so, with long breaks inbetween. Each time I came back to it, the character of the next section I composed was always different from the previous section.
At one point it was sounding a bit too saccharine sweet: so I decided to introduce an octatonic scale, then played with dissonance to make a more contemporary sounding ending.
Didn't really analyse the tone clusters I made, just experimented with lots of copying and pasting between instruments, and moved pitches around. Think the results were quite Stravinskian.
I don't expect it'll ever be played by a real orchestra: so not sure I'm going to bother with a proper score?
Also: I found this cool video on You Tube of what life may be like on Tau Ceti f: