Tolga

Whats wrong with the counterpoint ? :S

SimenN: yeah they told me before :D thanks anyway! and remember to check your private messages, I wish to borrow a theme of yours :) in rainbows 109: thank you for the comments about the score. I really should buy an orchestration book as you said, because my piece is a little "random" about the octaves and on. I will work on it !

Thank you very much for the comments ! maelstromtempest : I will work on it ! Thanks for the analysis:)

thank you ! the piece is better now thanks to you :D

thanks Mark :D i've never written something for trumpets before, i forgot how it was played !

Thanks !

I like it ! Good job man :)

Thanks frantz :D Come on guys ! nothing to say about it ? :(

Hi , I hope you will enjoy it ! I tried to compose something for three trumpets, please tell me what do you think :D Positive and negative feedback is of course welcome ! The pdf has a TAB section because it is done via GuitarPro: EDIT : The pdf now displays all the instruments thanks :) , but the MIDI is doing fine! EDIT*2 : The piece is updated , thanks Muzic! Tolga5.mid Tolga5.pdf

Hi , I hope you will enjoy my piece ! I found a motif and developped it, tell me what do you think :) Positive and negative feedback is welcome! thanks in advance. Tolga4.mid Tolga4.pdf

Hi, I hope you will enjoy my piece! I tried to use a motif and repeat it with three voices. The pdf has a TAB section because it has been done via GuitarPro. Positive and negative feedback is welcome ! Tolga1.mid Tolga1.pdf

JSbach BWV 578 - Fugue in G minor, and Mozart KV626

Here it is. The pdf has a "TAB" section because I am using a program called guitarpro, sorry :) So please tell me what do you think about this piece, and please take a look at the pdf because the organ covers most of the notes :D Tolga.pdf Tolga.mid

So here is the pdf ! Please tell me what do you think about the piece :D Many thanks! I also remade the ending please leave your comments! Tolga2.pdf Tolga2.mid

Okay i remade it, its in the bottom

Thanks mael I'm working on it!

I find truth in every post, and I have a question : Let's say 4'33'' is an anonymous piece. Would it be recognized as art ? I don't think we would be aware of its existence. And now let's say BWV 542 , or BWV 543 are anonymous pieces. I think they would be recognized as art. But we say that 4'33'' is art because it is MR.Cage that "wrote" it. We know that MR.Cage is a good composer, so we can say that it is art. So my question is the following : Do we have to know the intentions of the composer in order to decide wether it is art or not ? If Cage farts in a violin, is it art ? it is still sound Do we have to show everything is music, or should we write less notes and let the listener think about what he heard ?

First of all, the subject is very creative ! yould make more passages that imitate the subject, and if you want add a third voice to increase the diversity of the piece.

The prelude is very good! I really liked the opening, that was great :D the fugue lacks of spirit, (forgive my words I don't have the required vocabulary to elaborate a satisfying answer :() if only you could find a good subject picking elements from the prelude, that would be fantastic!

EDIT : I remade the piece, check the bottom of the page.

could you just write something ? 10 downloads out of 51 views is really weird i think people just read what I write next time i'll post my file without any explanations

First of all I'd like to thank everyone who commented my first attempt to write a piece. I didn't rush at every link you sent me because of homework and many many things, so I tried something simpler than a fugue or counterpoint this time. It's a piece for a single instrument. I didn't plan it to be a piece for piano but its the best sound for midi files since I am exporting it from GP5. The piece isnt finished, the final chord is just a coolness factor :D i'll remove it as soon as I read your advices for further composing. Thanks for your time! (here is my first post if you want to hear it :http://www.youngcomposers.com/forum/first-composing-14035.html Tolga20.mid

I really hope this is some kind of bad joke :(