Incomplete piano work

This is a piano piece I'm working on for my music extension assignment at school. The only real specification was that it has to be longer than 3 minutes...so :)

Anyway, so far the basic structure is:

Theme --> reiteration + transition --> second section

I'm thinking to continue it with an ornamented version of the original theme - maybe improvisation style, with lots of runs and things containing only the bare essentials of the theme - before bringing back a slight hint of the second section and coda-ing (yay for making up words!)

Attached are:

-Sibelius file

-Pdf of score

Please note: The glissandi are supposed to be black note only

I can't seem to be able to get the exported sound file from Sibelius, or my recorded version, onto here. Can someone tell me how I would be able to get them up - either by hosting or converting (in wav/mp3 format)?

Any suggestions/comments/critique, as well as ideas for a name would be awesome :) Thanks!

Music Extension Semester 2 v2.sib

Music Extension Semester 2 v2.pdf

i relaly like your main theme, i dont know if you'll like this but it reminds me of a car advert, a silver flash saloon car slying up and down small roads in the swiss alps :( fantastic! however one part i wasn't too keen on was the second half of bar 7; to my ears, it doesn't really fit into the piece, which is smooth and serene. as for a delvelopment, i really do like your idea, make sure to post it when your finished! keep it up

ljoekelsoey

Midi please :sadtears:

I like it, though a few of though glisses didn't sound right.

Good job so far.