little waltz

:Dhello Fellows, I have written one small waltz , want to share with you, I wait that like they , I call it "a sigh by his ears ":cool:

1. UN SUSPIRO POR SUS OREJAS.MID

1. un suspiro por sus orejas.pdf

Nice, simple and perfect! These are the adjectives that could better describe this beautiful little piece of music.

The only drawback could be its harmonic/melodic predictability, but, IMO, I wasn't for a moment bored. Maybe because of the piece's brevity. The variations in dynamics helped a lot...

And, oh, such a beautiful score...a treat, really!

Thumbs up, from me! Keep writing...I want more! :P

I have to say I liked it, nice and jolly! The only thing I'm not to mad about is the ending that was attached, it feels like the piece is finished, and then you try to at a little more...

But that's me, it doesn't detract from your piece at all. Very good!

very enjoyable!:thumbsup:

pretty nice.:) I also thought the ending was a bit extend though.

Love it! Especially like the trill at the ending! Nice touch, and lots of variation in the tune.

nice..I agree that it should end after the trill...very neat, simple, good!

It's a pretty little piece. :)

A perfect miniature.

Perfect piece. The ending gives it a nice little touch, i like it! Don't remove the ending whatever you do! This is a job well done!

Great little waltz! Very lovely, very melodious and joyfull! I love it!

Sweet!

Two things:

1. The figure at bar 11 bothers me for some reason and I can't put my finger on why. There's something that doesn't quite fit right in the melody. Maybe it's just me!

2. The four bar phrase at bar 58 sounds a little sparse to me.