May 4, 200817 yr The score is very clean except for one thing, at m.20, 32, and 36, the long strings of ellipses should not be used. For m.20 and 36, if it's a one measure crescendo you want, use a crescendo sign (hairpin). Or are you trying to indicate a crescendo poco a poco? I don't see how the subito marking in m.32 requires that ellipses, either.