My last instrumental rock piece (V3 Song)

This is my last instrumental rock piece.

I would like to hear all of your feedbacks, comments, criticize, analysis...etc

You can listen the mp3 of this song here :

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=402524&songID=6945985

or

www.myspace.com/ugurdariveren

Midi file

Anyone?

Post something other than a midi, my computer is rebelling against it and I'm sure you'll get a better response to an mp3. :)

Post something other than a midi, my computer is rebelling against it and I'm sure you'll get a better response to an mp3. :)

Maybe you're right but midi is short file and i dont think recording midi sound to mp3 and post it. I cant post real version too because I didn't record it yet.

This has some nice ideas and sounds quite upbeat. You have a nice theme going on here! It sounds really interesting, and the slower section was very nicely done. It is just a little repetitive, but that's fine. I think this sounds slightly comical, which is not a bad thing.

Good job!

I picture this in a nintendo game title

You can listen the mp3 of this song here :

SoundClick artist: Ugur Dariveren - page with MP3 music downloads

or

Ugur Dariveren on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Downloads

Nice work man. Very Satch.

The cut at 3:40 is pretty harsh. I'm not sure if a more solid transfer could be made. Same with the return to the head.

Thanks Ferkun.

The piece is interesting for use of the modal scale (lidian mode), and for the rithm change in the last part.....

You have a nice theme going on here! It sounds really interesting, and the slower section was very nicely done. It is just a little repetitive, but that's fine.

You have a nice theme going on here! It sounds really interesting, and the slower section was very nicely done. It is just a little repetitive, but that's fine.

Thanks for the taking time to listen and comment :)

This is pretty good. I did start a pretty good MP3 of it, but unfortunately just from the midi I wasn't able to transcribe the lead guitar part. But I might try again when my internet is back up.

This is pretty good. I did start a pretty good MP3 of it, but unfortunately just from the midi I wasn't able to transcribe the lead guitar part. But I might try again when my internet is back up.

I didn't get what do you mean :)

Your transitions are very interesting, I love the way you work with the guitars. The bass could use some work though, I put my bass up really high but I still can't tell if a bass part really exists at all. That could make all the difference in a song like this.

Thanks for your comments Lord. I have bass there but it plays usually root notes maybe thats why hard to tell. Also maybe the mix of it.