September 28, 200817 yr Check out my new composition. It's very different from and much more consistent than my last song, Scarlet Shadow. Link: Transience.mp3 - File Shared from Box.net - Free Online File Storage
October 5, 200817 yr you always have a chance for more comments when you post a score. 1. It sounds very much like incidental music. I get a Chrono Cross/ RPG like it touch. 2. I feel you meddle with to many different themes. I think you need to take one theme and run with it for a while. There are a ton of different themes in this song, i'm sure you could take one and work for with it for a while. 3. I think the beginning needs work. It sounds like you meddle quite a bit around the melody and thus when you go into the "b", "c" or whatever section you like to call it, it sounds disruptive rather than transitional. There is a lot of good material here, but you aren't using it effectively. I don't have really enough time to go into real detail, but those are a few small things.
October 5, 200817 yr i quite like your style, but this is not the style im familiar with, so i cant say much besides the fact that i like it.
