First time here need help with rock song! Please

So yeah Im writing a song and I need help with lyrics and guitar parts. I would do anything if you guys help me and I mean anything. If you wanna help me please reply you email and I will get back to you. Please and thank you!:D

lyrics what type of song

Thx!!!!!!!!!! Well Its a rock song and its about me liking this Romanian girl. Is there way I can talk to you on like i.m. program? AOL MSN yahoo anything? Please reply back. Also if you help me on this song. I will pay back with alot of replys on this site LOL!

This feels failspammy.

sure whats your aim

mines guitarelitist

Thx!!!!!!!!!! Well Its a rock song and its about me liking this Romanian girl. Is there way I can talk to you on like i.m. program? AOL MSN yahoo anything? Please reply back. Also if you help me on this song. I will pay back with alot of replys on this site LOL!

it would be sick if you used some Romanian folk themes in the song

Well Here it is Please tell me what to fix and change:

Rocking Love

Verse 1

Well, I traversed over the mountains

and through this universe

i found you

well, i arrived at your doorstep

to find, that

you were alone

Chorus

I say were rocking love

just like the babies in the cradle

i said were rocking love

rocking love all night long baby

verse 2

I came from a different planet

but i still see the resembelance

in you

Ive been to many places

to find

a girl like you

Chorus

I say were rocking love

just like the babies in the cradle

i said were rocking love

rocking love all night long baby

Verse 3

Well we rocked this unvierse

me and you,

the romanian girl

we didnt make a differrence

but we still found

a love

Chorus

I say were rocking love

just like the babies in the cradle

i said were rocking love

rocking love all night long baby

Solo

Chorus

I say were rocking love

just like the babies in the cradle

i said were rocking love

rocking love all night long baby

Edit: Took out pre-chorus

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Here's The music to it. It end right before the solo. Srry I haven't made that part Yet.

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