January 6, 200917 yr This is my first *real* piano piece, and the first piece I've put up on here for a WHILE. Its short, but its the length I want it to be at this point. I'd like some opinions please. Notes: Dynamic markings and crescendos/decrescendos seem to be a little messed in the .mus file, and .mid file. It doesn't like me. :/ For the record, it HATE .jgp files. But my .png ones were to big. :( I made this on Finale Notepad, so in order to change keys. I had to use accidentals. For more information, it starts in C, then goes to F for the rest of the song for the most part. Uploaded is 3 images files of the 3 pages of the song (_1,_2, and _3), midi file, and finale (notepad) 2008 file [sorry]. Song: I was trying for a goodbye, I'll see you again kind of thing, not sure how well THAT came out but, I like the song anyway. :D MP3: http://www.box.net/shared/5dtgqg3ccx EDIT: Updated files For_Long.MID For_Long.MUS
January 6, 200917 yr I can feel the "goodbye" thing you try to do. I think the flats on beat 1 in measure 6 are a bit of. I doesn't really work for my ears. Also there's something off in mm. 32. I can't see what it is, since the score is hardly readable. But the mood is quit strong. I liked that. I think it's not bad. I would like to hear a mp3 version of it.
January 6, 200917 yr Author Beat 1 of measure 6? Those are all naturals...? Unless you mean when I change key on beat 4? I planned on uploading an mp3, but it took me longer that expected to just get all those files. I may do that soon. Measure 32? its the about same as measures 31 and 21. Not exactly sure what might be doing that, I'll look at and see if I can get what you mean. Also, I can read the score fine. Are you clicking on the thumbnails? Thanks for your reply. I'll take a look at the sections you mentioned.
January 6, 200917 yr I see i can use a enlarger in the thumbnails. What i mean by mm. 6 first beat are the two flats on E and B. I think those first two flats don't sound right. To me that is ofcourse. By mm. 32 i mean. second page, last staff, thirth bar. Somethere sounds off. I can't pinpoint what it is exactly. It seems right. Maybe just the midi. I hope I made myself a little clearer.
January 7, 200917 yr Author I see i can use a enlarger in the thumbnails. What i mean by mm. 6 first beat are the two flats on E and B. I think those first two flats don't sound right. To me that is ofcourse. By mm. 32 i mean. second page, last staff, thirth bar. Somethere sounds off. I can't pinpoint what it is exactly. It seems right. Maybe just the midi. I hope I made myself a little clearer. Ah. I see. Thanks. I've changed them in the original post now. Better? EDIT: Added Mp3 to first post.
