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This is an adventurous song with alot of fast pace moments. This is actually the 5th movement in a symphony I'm writing. The whole thing is a huge story telling about this tragedy of these two families. I though since it could be a soundtrack cause it tells a story, I would put this here.

Anyway, the youtube video tells the story briefly while the music is playing in the background.

Tell me what you think.

Youtube Video with Story

Well apart from being filled with cliches and grammar and spelling errors it wasn't bad, had lots of great parts. I like your harmony. Also it isn't a song, it's a piece...

Oh and dude your name is hilarious, I mean come on...

It's not bad, but please remove all of that reverb - less is more. You can't hear half of what you've written because the sound gets mashed together. It's like the orchestra is playing in a cave the size of a football pitch :-)

It's not bad, but please remove all of that reverb - less is more. You can't hear half of what you've written because the sound gets mashed together. It's like the orchestra is playing in a cave the size of a football pitch :-)

Some of that is because of all the percussion I used at the beginning. It made it kind of loud and covered up some of the voices, I fixed that though. Other bits of it was finale, youtube, and the midi instruments. Like the trombones low pitches Just are nasty are really loud. I don't have control over those things.