Polyphonic Prelude "On Beatles" G-dur

This is my new 3-voice polyphonic prelude based on the lovely "Here, There and Everywhere" song by Beatles.

To recall the original Beatles melody you may check the song here.

Hope you like my version :)

Click to listen (mp3)

P.S. I'm working on sheet music currently (and not only for this piece) and will be posting it as soon as it's ready.

This is good. I felt it started out a bit indistinctive, but when you went up an octave the piece became clearer and you touched me with it. Maybe you can expand on that main theme with a contrasting section? I think a restatement of the theme would do wonders.

Thank you Gijs. I was thinking of a middle part and a reprise myself, because actually there's another melody in the original song which is not used yet (so I'd probably use it for the middle part). Thanks for the advice.