A Battle on the Beaches of Verisimilitude

Battle music of some kind. (or the third kind O.O)

A Battle on the Beaches of Verisimilitude

Well this certainly isnt something of a normal kind. Its a little too sporadic for my tastes. I think the backing parts need to be developed much more. The constant velocities and eighth notes get pretty abrasive and distracting. The sound effects seem a little random and out of place to my ears. Nothing about it really makes me think of a battle. The changes from different parts seem like they have potential once the parts themselves are organized a bit more. The chord changes are interesting.

It's for a video game and that's why it's not a normal 'song' lol

Um... :ermm:

I like the overall sound of the piece, and the interesting chord changes, and also the various little attentions to detail through-out the piece, but...

How in the world do you get "battle" out of this song? :facepalm:

It sounds sort of like fun at the beach or something! :lol:

Thanks for sharing, this was very enjoyable! :D

Battle?? BOuncy Land, more like :P

Anyway, it's quite enjoyable, however, it needs some work on making it a little less repettitive and teh good parts are ruined by the constant pianoo harping away. It get's really annoying at times.

It still a very nice start, however, if you want to make it sound better, use some variation!! I'll be looking forwrard to that improvement, should it happen :)