April 20, 201015 yr Have not contributed to this forum in a while. I have been visiting and listening but I hadn't made anything. Today I felt it was time,,, so i made a song maybe for a dungeon or a town environment. VIII
April 21, 201015 yr Welcome back, iiraiykha! I'm John. Nice to meet you! Nice track. I sorta feel a bit of dungeon or town environment here. If you knew what you were trying to depict, it might give your piece a little bit more thematic unity. I.e. the whole track will feel really focused like its representing one specific thing. I like your ostinato. I don't like when you harmonize it at the beginning. It sounds a little unpleasant and forceful. I think the piano bit at the end should have a percussion instrument with it. It sounds too lonely by itself. Even with the brass instrument in the middle, the texture feels really thin. Keep working on it, iiraiykha! Give it a bit more polish and the piece will sound great. -John
