One last kiss...

Well. there is some cold talk in the beginning. - "bla, bla, I have to leave you" - "why?" - "just the way it is baby". Then she grabs his arm and they perform one last kiss.

One last kiss...

its good , its fits easily in a film , and it wont distract the viewer , and it helps in the delivery of the scene to the viewer. but the music doesnt make a solid piece on its own .

I agree with abd. As a stand alone piece, there really isn't much to keep someone interested. As a movie song though, this is fantastic for it You capture that feeling and tone really well, and it fits greatly with the scene. So personally, I think this piece is great, I am just trying to see it from others views with that for most people it wouldn't keep them listening if there is nothing to go with it. Myself though, lovers it haha great job : )

Thanks. I'm glad you like it for what it is. Thing is it should barely be noticable, couldn't really stuff it because of this. Question is... does it sound proffesional?

Lolz at the description. What's cold talk?

Nice peace. It was a lot heavier than I expected. When was the last kiss "performed"? Was it at the first violin note at 0:42? That's where it sounds.

Solid and simple.

Does it sound professional? Nearly. I think your strong points for this one are the dynamics. Its pretty natural phrasing which does a lot for your piece. I think the second cello entry sounds slightly fake. Not that fake like OMG fake, but very slight. Your violins sound very good. Your mix sounds really good. What did you use to compose this?

Bla, bla, I have to leave you.

-John

haha. You're a funny guy John. The kiss is there somewhere. There is a lot of caresses and tear-filled eye contact in slowmo in there as well. I used garageband, so I've not done much mixing. There's only four tracks, so not that difficult of a song. Thanks John.

I like this a lot. It's effective. The solemnness of the strings really emphasizes the coldness of the situation. Like John, I could hear the kiss at 0:46... almost as if time stopped. Now where's part two, with the snazzy electric guitar and beating techno?