July 2, 201015 yr Author Hello! Thx a lot for suggestion Yes ,time signature is 8/8 (3+3+2) and I can not tell precisely say tonality...its in B flat.In original tempo is Allegro agitato, so perfomance shuld be full of emotional charge, feral , thats why I put end abrupt. Allso i put Ternary form (ABA), but in last A part i put passages (A first part right hand) in left hand,so I hope its sound completely.What u mean with "sense of direction"? Are u mean its not contemporary? Sorry for my bad english :( I hope u understud everything.
July 2, 201015 yr Author Ok, thanks a lot for suggestion. Can you tell me your opinion abaut another compositions which I applauded today? I am from one country in Sutheastern Eurpe.
July 3, 201015 yr i really like this etude, great musical maturity is shown in your composition. i agreed with the above poster that it would be great if there was a more climactic moment to your piece, or an apex - it just seems to rattle along a bit and then decide to stop. it might be interesting if you varied your motif a little bit and pointed out different angles of it now and again - adding a note, or an accent, etc.
July 4, 201015 yr The ending might work better if you have another chord on the second beat of the last 2 (in the 3+3+2). It would be more abrupt that way, making it clear that it's supposed to be that kind of ending. I don't think the piece needs a climax, and it's actually better off without one; I'm tired of climaxes.
