July 7, 201015 yr Interesting opening chords. Towards the :40 mark, are you making mistakes or is the irregular rhythm intentional? I like the second half. The chords have a nice colour to them, but are you going to continue this piece? Sounds unsatisfied. Pretty good for a first piano comp tho.
July 7, 201015 yr Author i'm making mistakes I can't play it correctly from beginning to the end. I'm not going to continue this piece
July 8, 201015 yr Don't quite cause you can't play it. I think the ideas in this piece are really nice, the chord changes at the end are very pretty. I'm not as interested by the repetition in the right hand at the beginning (might be cool if you varied it rhythmically and harmonically a little). I like this piece, and would like you to finish it, but if you don't like it, then don't force yourself.
July 14, 201015 yr Author I update the file. now its clean without note mistakes, but still some irregular rythm, its also faster now
