September 16, 201015 yr Hi, this is my piece I wrote for IG Music Exam. Any comments appreciated. Thanks :D Thoughts
September 18, 201015 yr Very good pace and steady theme throughout. I would change a few notes here and there, but very nice overall.
September 18, 201015 yr Hi, I like this idea- maybe a bit cheesy, but still nice. Bar 14- the Ab to A natural is a bit odd... I'm not so sure about it. The cello needs the melody. And, the melody needs to change a bit. Maybe continue with it, add another section. Good work! Heckel
September 22, 201015 yr Nice, very nice to listen to, felt you kinda ran out of ideas at bar 26 where it changes,"crap,, where do i take it from here?!?" sort of job. There are an awful lot of block chords in the piano, something i dont generally like, try to write for it more interestingly.. a few grace notes, or broken chords, orpolyphony or something, would add a lot to it i think. Cool piece though
