Path to Freedom

the titel says it all^^Path to Freedom

Path to Freedom

Neat piece.

You've panned the instruments around, but I think you should work on balancing them out. They all seem to playing around the same volume and it's really hard to hear the melody through everything.

Interesting groove developing at 0:55.

Good feel happening at 1:40. Starting to sound like Twilight Princess or Crouching Tiger.

Your track is distorting around 2:30. Turn it down to get rid of it.

Neat piece, Alpha. Definitely start with balancing all the instruments so that we can hear clearly make out the melody. Are you composing with notation software or with a DAW? I only ask cuz it's easier to edit the volumes on a DAW like logic or Cubase.

Peace,

-John

Neat piece.

You've panned the instruments around, but I think you should work on balancing them out. They all seem to playing around the same volume and it's really hard to hear the melody through everything.

Interesting groove developing at 0:55.

Good feel happening at 1:40. Starting to sound like Twilight Princess or Crouching Tiger.

Your track is distorting around 2:30. Turn it down to get rid of it.

Neat piece, Alpha. Definitely start with balancing all the instruments so that we can hear clearly make out the melody. Are you composing with notation software or with a DAW? I only ask cuz it's easier to edit the volumes on a DAW like logic or Cubase.

Peace,

-John

thanks for your opinion!

im using a daw fl studio, but in near future i will change to cubase i think

Hello.

There are some fairly good ideas in here, but the mix itself is a bit lacking in quality, which is fine at your stage of composing, but here is a little advice:

Try to find a way to have repetition in those strings; try to replicate round robin. More expression is needed here. Messing with volumes and faders is a nice way to deal with this, or if there is a modulation DXF option, that will work fantastically.

I hope the best for your career,

Phillip Lober