May 21, 201114 yr Very intense. I really like the deep bass note that plays every couple of measures, it really adds a lot to the feel.
May 28, 201114 yr Welcome to YC, Marinus! Cool track! Try lowering the amount of reverb on everything by just a smidgeon. Its most noticeable with the double bass at the beginning. Action scores like Inception or TRON: Legacy use less and are more effective because of it. Really liking your use of percussion with strings. Very effective. Your string samples sound pretty solid too. Kudos. Your bass drum at the end is a little weaker, and it sounds odd that it has much less reverb than the strings immediately before. I think this would fit an action sequence really well. On its own, its not varied enough to truly pique our interest. There's a lot of potential in the percussion you have in this track. Expand up on that. Add it earlier, subtly so that the intro stays interesting. Later, you can have an entire percussion breakdown to liven things up a bit. Listen to this track from TRON: Legacy . Similarly dark, with string ostinatos, and low Hans Zimmer drones. They build the other melodies in there with the brass to keep us stimulated. Cool stuff, Marinus! -John