March for Student's Band

This march was written by me in 2014 for a student's band, but unfortunately, it has never been performed.
The syntax tries to follow the structure of a classical march (with repeats, introduction, trio, etc.).
I'm up to write a better ending for the piece. I think after D.C. al Fine, I should add a dominant 7th svorzando chord in eighth time, also staccato maybe, and end with a tonical chord with glissando (sol-la-ti-do) for the instruments carrying the lead melody.

Recorded with EWQL's Symphonic Orchestra Gold Edition. 

Edited May 14, 20169 yr by Defearon

Cute, happy, and fun. Very nice. The section at m. 20 I think had a weird tone in it, in either the dominant or the tonic and I can't really tell, and I could be entirely wrong, but tone wise that was pretty much the only thing I heard.

The ending you propose, if I understand you right, would work, it just needs to be surprising, but also fit enough to carry the melodic work you've done prior.

I just think this could be longer. It's a cool idea I don't think you expand on enough. So far, it seems like an exposition to a longer work. If you have some time, maybe consider expanding? What you have here is pretty good too though!