November 14, 20169 yr hello everyone, i m back with my new piece, just listen to it, appreciate it and comment on it. Edited November 14, 20169 yr by cloud10000
November 14, 20169 yr The 'staccato' sections are too similar to Chopin's op. 25 no. 4(? It's been a while). I sincerely think that your time would be better spent writing shorter, more well-thought-out pieces than what you have here.
November 14, 20169 yr I mostly agree with johnbucket. It's far too sectionalized and needs more structural and occasionally harmonic development. Nothing wrong with a collection of ideas but it doesn't seem as coherent here.
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