Ben Maier Posted January 12, 2017 Share Posted January 12, 2017 This is a lil track I chucked together recently and i was trying to create a piece for a moment building in tension. I haven't really done a piece like this one that I've liked too much but this one was the first that kinda worked the best for me. Sooo anyway here it is! Love to know what you guys think :D MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Trouble > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maarten Bauer Posted January 13, 2017 Share Posted January 13, 2017 Hi Ben, I enjoyed it. Your ''moment building in tension'' works very well, there is a clear climax. I still have some feedback: The theme you use is fine, but it can be developed more. In my opinion, the music is too repetitive from 1:00, even when you vary in dynamics and the use instruments. I hope you find the feedback useful. Maarten Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken320 Posted January 15, 2017 Share Posted January 15, 2017 This music has a lot going for it except propulsion. It has motion, yes. But if you want to kick it up to the next level, try varying the bass line away from the monotone G. Just about anything would work in Gm scale. I leave it to you when and how. Small things make a difference when it's in the bass. Why not try it and repost? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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