February 10, 20179 yr This is second time i write a song T.T As recommend, i tried copying an aspect of a piece. i would like those professionals to give me some suggestion to improve my composing skills..Thank you ~ DMN no tameni.mid
February 10, 20179 yr I know what piece inspired this, but I can't remember the name. I've heard it a million times but can't put my finger on it...Oh well. Well, for your second time writing a piece I'd say it is a well done second attempt, though if you were trying to emulate the original, you would need to speed up the tempo and add more notes using your right hand. But I think it sounds good, I can't give much orchestration advice...but I can tell you that the sound quality was good and clear.
February 11, 20179 yr @LostSamurai The piece you're looking for is Beethoven's "Für Elise." It's a lovely piece and I definitely hear the similarities. There's just a bunch of little irregularities to clear up. Such as: The first repeat you have goes to a pickup phrase which really jostles the phrase structure. Maybe put it after the first measure and make the pickup in the repeat bar. mm. 5, 21: Why the 16th note? m. 18: No 3rd in your chord, especially when that would be period specific to Beethoven. m. 11: octave leap in soprano, making the octave chord a little not worth it. It's a bit too similar maybe, but I see what you're going for in changing it up. It's a good compositional exercise, to say the least.
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