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This is my 10th soliloquy for piano.

Here is the link to my 9th piano soliloquy:

http://www.youngcomposers.com/t33979/soliloquy-for-piano-no-9/

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Pretty good use of rhythmic development and motivic structure instead of notes.
However:

  • mm. 14-16, chords are very obscure and are hard to sonically differentiate.
  • m. 4, the oblique motion to the third interval is a little bit strange and jump sounding.
  • mm. 10-11 was the only place where the left hand didn't really seem to match the right.
  • Use some cross staff voicing with your low right hand notes (i.e. m. 8)
  • Maybe using that 2/4 time sig change would be better for all the instances of that kind of rhythmic cadence, but it works well enough, I suppose.

Cheers!

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