OliverKovacs Posted March 24, 2017 Share Posted March 24, 2017 Hello, this is my new song about Spring. I'm sorry if I'm late. :D I didn't have much time to write music these days. I hope, you'll like my new work, please write your opinion in comment! https://soundcloud.com/mardumusix/oliver-kovacs-spring-is-coming MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume < previous > next menu Olivér Kovács - Spring is Coming < previous > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted March 27, 2017 Share Posted March 27, 2017 A major to E-flat major is a bit of a weird change. Your direct cadence to the G minor and VI chords can be awkward. Also your B-flat major to B minor in the second section. Overall it doesn't really sound like spring to me... the orchestration is fine for the most part (just be careful about brass power over string power)... more like an Elfman score. That's just my 2 cents though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverKovacs Posted March 28, 2017 Author Share Posted March 28, 2017 On 2017. 03. 27. at 5:30 PM, Monarcheon said: A major to E-flat major is a bit of a weird change. Your direct cadence to the G minor and VI chords can be awkward. Also your B-flat major to B minor in the second section. Overall it doesn't really sound like spring to me... the orchestration is fine for the most part (just be careful about brass power over string power)... more like an Elfman score. That's just my 2 cents though. Thanks for your opinion Monarcheon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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