OliverKovacs Posted April 30, 2017 Share Posted April 30, 2017 (edited) Hello, This is my new track. I hope you'll like it! https://soundcloud.com/mardumusix/cataclysm Edited April 30, 2017 by OliverKovacs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted May 2, 2017 Share Posted May 2, 2017 The beginning could be a little smoother in terms of sound design. The dropoff from the big hits to the melody was a little bit too precipitous in my opinion. I like how the bass voices and sound effects slowly come in instead of having it in all at once to drive the piece along. I found your vi chords to a little distracting when they resolved to D minor. Not all the time, since it's a very jarring chord change, but I think it could be smoother at least some of the time, at least for contrast, at most to make it sounds more intense. Vary the harmonic rhythm a little bit... go from vi to V in two beats before going to the minor tonic maybe...? Play with it. The middle section was really cool, so I was kind of let down when the old chord progression came back without many changes at the end. I half-expected the track to end with those huge hits from the beginning to make a statement, was surprised when it didn't happen. Good job. See if you can tweak a few things here and there, but it's nice! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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