DeL Posted September 9, 2017 Share Posted September 9, 2017 Autumn Morning MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Autumn Morning > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted September 9, 2017 Share Posted September 9, 2017 Chord 4: resolving to a dissonance is normally frowned upon. 0:44: The major 7th chord is nice, but having it as a dissonance in a run is weird. 1:00: 16th note run is a little out of character. Different from the ones at around 2' because it doesn't follow a pattern. 1:36: Gb∆7 dissonance problem again. 2:43 D∆M7 dissonance problem this time. 2:55: Bbm7 intended? 3:06: Intended dissonance? This piano playing is a little shaky so that's why I'm not sure about your notes sometimes. General things include your occasional 3 bar phrases before the higher parts and the staticness of the bassline figure. Could also use an actual ending as opposed to a fade. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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