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First of all, I noticed the piano and strings play in unison, which really isn't necessary. I noticed that you fixed this in Cloudshine. I also noticed problems with tempo consistency. Please keep a steady tempo and rhythmic pattern. At around 2:10, I noticed that a note wasn't held long enough. Avoid the use of root-position diminished triads, unless they're ina sequence of fifths or something. I noticed one at around 2:25, and this is not a nice place for root position diminished triads. I have noticed that your music is more suited for background purposes because of its static and somewhat repetitive nature. If  you want your compositions to be suitable for concert performance, more atmospherical and melodic development is expected.

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