September 16, 20178 yr I am really curious to your thoughts on this track! apart from the ugly cello samples, some mastering screw ups and way too many slides, I am quite happy with it.
September 16, 20178 yr I'm with you on the slides, I think. Save 'em for the dramatic points. 0:40 - D minor with the minor 13th, risky. 0:44 - Dm/C/Bb, doesn't function like a polychord and ends up sounding like a Dm/C9 which isn't exactly what you want. This pattern repeats a few times. 1:11 - Unexpected, but very welcome change, nice. The drums could be mixed a little better and could be lengthened, and would be a perfect place to change up the chord progression to build drama. Maybe a III chord or IV or Vsus or something. I kind of wanted it to end, but a loop is cool too, I suppose. Generally, pretty good stuff.
September 16, 20178 yr Apart from those technical issues that Monarcheon describe pretty well, the music is beautiful. Yes, the change with incoming drums is a plus.
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