Liam Doyle Posted October 31, 2017 Share Posted October 31, 2017 (edited) My first attempt at a symphonic styled composition. I am 16 in yr 11 in Australia. Please give me feedback on what I need to improve on and tips on what Symphony No.1 in D major - I. Doloroso e lento.pdfI should build to next Also cause I went from Sibelius 7.5 to Garageband there is no Timpani, so it's a Vibraphone Edited October 31, 2017 by Liam Doyle MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu I._Doloroso_e_lento > next PDF Symphony No.1 in D major - I. Doloroso e lento Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axelroxasxion3582 Posted November 1, 2017 Share Posted November 1, 2017 Hmmm. I can’t really hear anything.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liam Doyle Posted November 1, 2017 Author Share Posted November 1, 2017 What do you mean? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axelroxasxion3582 Posted November 2, 2017 Share Posted November 2, 2017 Nothing is playing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony Johnson Posted November 2, 2017 Share Posted November 2, 2017 The only thing I hear wrong with it was the first cymbal crash, it kind of came out of nowhere. Overall, I really liked this. Good work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liam Doyle Posted November 3, 2017 Author Share Posted November 3, 2017 6 hours ago, Axelroxasxion3582 said: Nothing is playing RIP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilv Posted December 26, 2017 Share Posted December 26, 2017 My biggest thing to you would be to make the harmonies more complex by adding more voices. The bass instruments aren't very involved. You can also work on more rhythmic complexity. Good piece for background purposes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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