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Symphony No.1 in D major I. Doloroso e lento


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My first attempt at a symphonic styled composition. I am 16 in yr 11 in Australia.

Please give me feedback on what I need to improve on and tips on what Symphony No.1 in D major - I. Doloroso e lento.pdfI should build to next

Also cause I went from Sibelius 7.5 to Garageband there is no Timpani, so it's a Vibraphone

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My biggest thing to you would be to make the harmonies more complex by adding more voices. The bass instruments aren't very involved. You can also work on more rhythmic complexity. Good piece for background purposes.

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