Laoso

I'm a bit lost with this one. It needs work i know, i'm just not sure where to take it once I've brought the  main theme back in around 3:45, carry on building it up bigger? Strip it right back? Any ideas on instrumentation etc very welcome...

I think it's beautiful.

I think that you're right, you should build it now. 

Add percussion, add more instruments, more basses, more chords per bar, try to rise it bit by bit, climb up with chords and scale changes.

Try to add a new element you didn't have before.

I'm not sure if there's story or purpose for this piece, if there isn't I'd add a solo woodwind instrument- flute, oboe, english horn, clarinet, basson etc.

You know what, you can add a new solo instrument in general. French horn, cello, violin, viola... maybe even contrabass, idk.

I hope that was helpful. 

On 10/11/2017 at 3:45 PM, Rabbival507 said:

I think it's beautiful.

I think that you're right, you should build it now. 

Add percussion, add more instruments, more basses, more chords per bar, try to rise it bit by bit, climb up with chords and scale changes.

Try to add a new element you didn't have before.

I'm not sure if there's story or purpose for this piece, if there isn't I'd add a solo woodwind instrument- flute, oboe, english horn, clarinet, basson etc.

You know what, you can add a new solo instrument in general. French horn, cello, violin, viola... maybe even contrabass, idk.

 

I hope that was helpful. 

 

Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it. If you have any specific ideas for solos etc I’d love to hear them, more than happy to send a file of the piece for you to write on top of if you’re willing? 

@Jonny Clifford

Yes, I'll gladly help you.

I really like the piece :)

Please send it as a midi file, if you want me to be able to open it in my Cubase.

btw, I heard a bit of Morrowind theme at some point of the piece and I also wondered... have you ever heard of the piece Divenire? I think you'll like it.