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[Alternative] Wayfarer

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With the final song of our album, "Prisoner 8", this last song, "Wayfarer", concludes on a high and happier note. The bells signify the end of Prisoner 8's journey, as he has finally made it to freedom. Or has he...?

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nmP0vyXkmN8

I'm a little confused by your V/vi chord resolving to I sometimes. Your bass notes also don't always seem to line up with your upper voices. I know voice leading is important, but it doesn't always work easily. 0:37 is an example of this that comes to mind.
Your more laid back section is quite nice.
The third section has a really strange chord at 2:07. Not so much the chord it leads to, since I can calculate the extensions to it. The C# in the background is a little weird.
Overall, careful with your use of the major seventh voicing, since in parallel it voice leads to parallel dissonances.

I like it! It really builds momentum, and has a beautiful legato section. Great work. 

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