Ostinato theme

Opinion please 

@Ante

That was... far too repetitive for me.

I asked google what Ostinato means and it said that it should be rhythmically repetitive.

I see that you put it under "writer's block and suggestions" so here's what I think you should do-

you have some good melodic/rhythmic ideas here, take them out one by one like when fishermen fish fish.

Then, when you have all these tasty fish in your net, delete everything, clean away the whole sea and start blank,

but with the few fish you have from your previous sea.

I think the religious have some sort of story about it, taking the good ones and starting fresh.

Which is a terrible thing to do with worlds but a great thing to do with music.

Good luck with that.

Please, when you repost it, call me with @Rabbival507, I want to see where you'd take it.