July 8, 20187 yr Hi everyone! Here's my very first finished piano composition: Prelude no. 1 in G minor (named "Psiche"). I know there are some parts that sound bad...I'm still working to fix them. Hope you like it, but still...any suggestion or criticism is very appreciated!
July 8, 20187 yr OMG I would change the left hand pattern somewhere. I know a prelude is something short, but the speed and the hammering of this left hand is a bit too much. Surely the fact that there are no dynamics doesn't help, although it has a baroque feeling (where dynamics were sparse). The figure or motif in the middle and low voice in m. 6-7 doesn't work very well. Also, those thick chords in m. 53, 54, 65 are not in the mood of this neobaroque style.
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