Pacman12 Posted July 21, 2018 Share Posted July 21, 2018 (edited) https://musescore.com/user/28048203/scores/5171640 Edited July 21, 2018 by Pacman12 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted July 21, 2018 Share Posted July 21, 2018 It’s correct. But in general you don’t take risas. Harmony and Melody stay sale. You can explore more for the left hand. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bkho Posted July 23, 2018 Share Posted July 23, 2018 I agree with Luis, you should try to vary the left hand more. The parallel fifths make it sound blocky and heavy (and technically should be avoided whenever possible if you're trying to write in a conventional western tonal classical style. But a good effort. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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