My piece for accompanied flute

My composition for flute and piano.

Roberto Zini - Gradita Sorpresa

I hope it can be interesting.

My first impression is of a very nice piece. There are some dissonances which don't quite work. Overall, I feel that the harmonic structure could be more interesting.

I think that the flute needs to take a break at some point. It will help the player and will stop it sounding too monotonous.

I feel that you could modulate and have a development section that brings lots of interest into the piece.

It seems to end quite suddenly, but this is maybe just my ears.

Well done, though. Your flute writing is very good and I like the feel of this piece.

Thanks for the appreciation and for the useful suggestions. It is ever welcome to have feedbacks like yours.