Don’t know how to name it.

Hello everyone, I’m a 16 year old pianist from the Netherlands. This is an composition that I’ve created recently. I’m sorry about the bad audio quality, it has been recorded by an Iphone. Secondly, no sheet music since I can’t read sheet music.

Thanks

Do you want a name or a review?

It surely is better than what I composed when I was your age (about two years ago).

And yet, it feels familiar somehow. Sounds like many other things.

I'm not a good listener though, if you had uploaded a sheet music it could have been a better review.

It's more difficult for me to follow your piece, see it as a whole and understand it in general when there's no sheet music.

The only note I have is that it sounds like a collection of smaller pieces. 

Each part repeats a material within itself but there's nothing that... kind of puts these all together.

Making a piece made of smaller pieces makes sense of course, but since your piece is three and a half minutes long... I'd expect some sort of connection.

Make a rondo out of these maybe. Keep coming back to your first idea (A B A C A D etc).

Right now for me it felt like (A B C D etc) which is just... different motives one after the other.

But maybe I'm wrong, I can't go back and take a quick look to see if I got it right since, again, there are no notes to look at.

I did give it a second listen though.

About a name... well it could have many. Music can be interpreted in many ways from many points of view. 

Let me give it a third listen and see if any picture comes into my mind.

Well again, it sounds like many nameless pieces. "Noctorne No. 3", "Pno No. 42", "Sonatina in E Phrygian with added augmented fifths" etc.

Try and think- what picture did I have in mind? What inspired me to create this piece? How does the piece feels like to me?

I hope this helps somehow.

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@Rabbival507 thanks for your time and response, I really appreciate it. I will definetly think about your words, and soon I will come back with the answers after giving it a little more thought. Thanks in advance.