Freedom of the Press

Here's a tune I wrote in the Sonar 8.5 piano roll with some old virtual instruments.

Thanks for listening.

-Rick

i should have expected the march style... Gah! Wish you'd sung the vocals so we could at least hear them, but I get the jist. There's a market out there for humor songs, especially about current events, you should definitely share it with the vocals and maybe some real instrumentalists. Shouldn't be terribly hard to find a few local musicians (college, old retired musicfolks, etc.) who would be willing to read down your piece. You never know what could be your break. Melodically it's good, I think you could have had some stronger supporting parts. Consider varying the texture and presentation of the melodic/supporting material to outline the form and provide some moments for the listeners to grab onto.

Keep writing!

Gustav Johnson