September 11, 20196 yr Hey, this is my first time posting. Here's my most recent composition, written in 2 hours, a whole bunch of stress, and some existential crisis. I'm open to any and all critisisms. My personal thoughts are that I feel the composition really needed an improv. section and/or more time to create a larger aesthetic to really sell the sparse quality I wanted. Thanks for checking it out. --also, if you didnt realise, the title is a play on the words sweetest voices. I can let you guys try to guess what I meant by that.
November 1, 20196 yr I could listen to m.14 to the end all day. Great work. All I would say is that this is too short for it to sound sparse. Specially because you have this strong shift from a "A" to "B" part, which makes it all very concise. Good job!
December 18, 20196 yr Liked the vibe of this. I don't totally agree with the above comment about length, but the development of intervals through a consistent means was heard well enough. m. 14 did strike me as uncharacteristic at first, but its devolution was a nice little effect. A tad more time into that might have been welcome.
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