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My very first composed song

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  • 3 weeks later...

I liked it -- especially the backing track and the chorus. I think if you changed your verses to include notes other than the root of the chord, it could give them more interest. Also, the key change in the middle was a little jarring. Would it be better if you didn't have the rests in between?

Good job, and thanks for sharing!

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