"Marcia Funebre" for piano

"Marcia Funebre" for Piano

Here a little funeral march that proably I will generate a more developed pice from it:

Marcia Funebre (3).mp3

Marcia Funebre.pdf

Open for suggestion and feedback!

ADVICE! The dynimic notation is still not finished.

Edited November 4, 20196 yr by Hendrik Meniere

It's very dramatic and intense. The growling low octaves create a dark atmosphere. A couple things:

Clefs: I think writing in the baritone and bass 8vb clef is a bit unusual. It's better to write with a bass clef for the right hand.

Bar 7: These A#s would be better to write as Bbs.

Have you any plans to make this longer? I think it seems a bit short and underdeveloped - it has a lot of potential.

Thanks @aMusicComposer a lot for your feedback and suggestions! 🙂 🙂 🙂 

14 hours ago, aMusicComposer said:

Clefs: I think writing in the baritone and bass 8vb clef is a bit unusual. It's better to write with a bass clef for the right hand.

The baritone clef was my mistake! I did not realised that I had put a baritone clef!!!! Thanks a lot for advicing me!

14 hours ago, aMusicComposer said:

Bar 7: These A#s would be better to write as Bbs.

When It comes to sharps and flats I havo no idea. I have changed the key signature to D minor/ F major. I do not know if that solves the problem? Well.. anyways  thanks!

14 hours ago, aMusicComposer said:

Have you any plans to make this longer? I think it seems a bit short and underdeveloped - it has a lot of potential.

I do have but right now I'm blocked !!!😞 no inspiration...

Well, for a third time thanks a lot!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 

Here the corrected score:

Edited November 5, 20196 yr by Hendrik Meniere

The second score looks a lot better in my opinion. Putting the key signature to D minor did resolve those accidentals.

9 hours ago, Hendrik Meniere said:

I do have but right now I'm blocked !!!😞 no inspiration...

Don't worry about it! There will come a time when you will find the inspiration to complete this. It's a great start you've got so well done!