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About journeying inwards, the adventure that happens within while adventures are taking place outside. This is my first upload here, just putting it out there for any comments or suggestions 🙂 

I'm not making music professionally... yet. But I hope to do!

 

Btw how do I add from soundcloud? doesn´t seem to work 😮

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On 1/6/2020 at 6:02 PM, ApeInSpace said:

Btw how do I add from soundcloud? doesn´t seem to work 😮

Try pasting a link to the web page in which the piece is played?

This could have been great for a game, sounds like a Zelda-adventure, with a sound a little darker.

I think you should consider changing the balance of the piece, in many places the bass and accompaniment are louder than the melody itself.

Around 2:50 it changes flavor, you add some interesting drums and choir, but then it's lost quickly afterwards.

I think you should keep these, although it's not bad the way it is.

Also I see that you're a new user so you should note that notes will probably get you the best reviews. I can't give a good analysis only by ear. 

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Some strange polychords built up in the climactic section. It does create some tension, but mostly I just get confused by the voice leading whenever there's a cadence.

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